Bewildered (Haiku)


Haiku / Wednesday, February 7th, 2018

When the snowflake shines,

it doesn’t lookΒ bewildered

staring at the sun.

 

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Blessings,

Gavin

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3 Replies to “Bewildered (Haiku)”

  1. It still doesn’t capture the essence of what a haiku should be, but I’m ok with that. I like using the 17-syllable structure to express observations, it’s a sweet little challenge.

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